My four-leaf clover earrings
I like these lovely , white earrings because they were a present. A relative brought them to me from India.I often wear them . I think they are the most beautiful in the world and combine very well with any colour. You probably have seen me wearing those earrings at school, haven´t you?
My music colection
I love my wonderful , large , old CD colection. I´ve got more than three hundred CDs. People think that it is old fashioned and more expensive but I think it´s better to buy a good , new CD than download it from the internet.I started buying CDs when I was a teenager with my pockect money.
My black dress
I have a very elegant ,long , old black dress which I always wear on special occasions. I always choose this dress whenever I have a party or another particular event because it is the most comfortable one.I have more elegant clothes but this item is the best.Bye
Soledad
My green jeans
ResponderEliminarI have a beautiful, long, new, green jeans. I love myself when I go out with my friends because it is very nice. It´s my favorite jeans!
My collection of coins
I find it interesting my collection of old coins. I have more than 300 currencies. People think it's a great idea because it is a reminder of your trip to another country
My bracelet
I have a Press a I love is pink, that is friendship. My best friend gave it to me. The ground have almost always. It is very nice and I do not take it off for anything I take it off.
Bye
Juliana Vanegas Posada
Hi Juliana: Congratulations for being the first!!
ResponderEliminarHere goes your correction:
My green jeans
I have a pair of beautiful, long, new, green jeans. I love myself when I go out with my friends because they are very nice. They´re my favorite jeans!
My collection of coins
I find it interesting my collection of old coins. I have more than 300 coins (or more than 300 different currency samples). People think it's a great idea because it is a reminder of your trip to another country.
My bracelet
I have a Press and I love it; it is pink, that means friendship. My best friend gave it to me. It is very nice and I do not take it off for anything.(I never take it off).
Bye
Juliana Vanegas Posada
My songs library
ResponderEliminarSince I was a little child I loved the music. I went to piano lessons for 4 years and today I also play the piano, but I don't go to any lesson. Obviously, I love listening to music and I'm everyday and everywhere with a song in my ears. I turn on the radio everyday for few hours, but I also listen to my library: it has got more than six-hundred-fifty songs! I take my collection everywhere because I have it on my beautiful white laptop and also on my black phone and MP3 Player, and I'm also thinking to copy it to the cloud! -There are many songs for lose it accidentally! ;-) -.
I also like to download some piano music sheets of some songs that I love. I take in learn it much time, frequently about one or two months, but when I get it, I'm very happy :)
Happy listening!
Mario ;-)
Hi Mario, here goes your correction.
EliminarI love music since I was a little child.I went to piano lessons for 4 years and today I still play the piano, but I don't go to any lesson. Obviously, I love listening to music and I have always a song in my ears(mind). I turn on the radio for a few hours everyday, but I also listen to music on my library: it has got more than six-hundred-fifty songs! I take my collection everywhere because I have it on my beautiful white laptop and also on my black phone and MP3 Player, and I'm also thinking to upload it on the cloud!
I also like to download some piano music sheets of some songs that I love. I spend al ot of time learning them. It usually takes me about one or two months, but when I get it, I'm very happy :)
Happy listening!
Mario ;-)
I love my collection of mobile:
ResponderEliminarI love her because I remember the phones I've had over life and I like to remember them and see what kind of phones had at the time, I keep them all in a box and always when I buy a new mobile phone I put the old one in the box and other mobile lame anecdotes and memories with the phone and the features that you had that phone
Adolfo
Hi Adolfo, here goes your correction. Let me remind you that you have to write about three objects and try not to use a translator please.
EliminarI love my collection of mobile phones:
I love it because it reminds me of the phones I've had over my life and I like to remember them and see what kind of phones I had at the time. I keep them all in a box and when I buy a new mobile phone I always put the old one in the box.I also keep my lame anecdotes and memories asociated with the phone.
Adolfo
My favourite gadet:
ResponderEliminar- My Ipad is big,white and it has got a beautiful blue cover.
- It was a present for my birthay, my parents give me.
- I like my Ipad because I can download games and I canvlisten to music.My Ipad is white because for me is the most wonderful colour.
My prefer duved:
- I have got a beautiful, big, new, red duved.
- The last year my mother gave me in Christmas.
- I love my duved because it is tissue has got a big shield of my favourite team "Atlético del Madrid". I think this team is the football team in the world.
The best pyjama on my life:
- I have got a confortable, new, grey and black pyjama.
- My uncle gave me nine months ago because I passed all my exams.
- I love because it is very hot and soft. All the nights in winter I love put on my pyjama
Bye
Cristina Peral nº19
Congratulations Cristina. here goes your correction.
EliminarMy favourite gadget:
- My Ipad is big,white and it has got a beautiful blue cover.
- It was a present for my birthay, my parents gave it to me.
- I like my Ipad because I can download games and I can listen to music.My Ipad is white because for me it is the most wonderful colour.
My favourite duvet:
- I have got a beautiful, big, new, red duvet.
- The last year my mother gave it to me on Christmas.
- I love my duvet because it has got a big shield of my favourite team "Atlético del Madrid". I think this team is the best football team in the world.
The best pyjamas in my life:
- I have got a confortable, new, grey and black pyjamas.
- My uncle gave it to me nine months ago because I passed all my exams.
- I love it because it is very hot and soft. I love to put on (wear) my pyjamas every night in winter.
Bye
Cristina Peral nº19
Bye
Cristina Peral nº19
-My iPad
ResponderEliminarI've got a beautiful black iPad. My parents gave it to me two years ago and I love it. I usually play games, I usually listen to music and I send messages and emails to my friends a lot. It's fantastic.
-My table football
I've got a little red and yellow table football. My uncles gave it to me four years ago. I love my table football because I can play with it with my friends. This is a great game to play with my friends and my family. It's great!
-My clock
I love my original big red clock. My uncles gave it to me one year ago. This is very original because it is similar to a watch. This is in one wall of my room. It's the best clock of the world.
Bye,
Pablo Mateos
Hi Pablo, here goes your correction. Congratulations
Eliminar-My iPad
I've got a beautiful black iPad. My parents gave it to me two years ago and I love it. I usually play games, listen to music and I send messages and emails to my friends a lot. It's fantastic.
-My table football
I've got a little red and yellow table football. My uncles gave it to me four years ago. I love my it because I can play with my friends. This is a great game to play with my friends and my family. It's great!
-My clock
I love my original big red clock. My uncles gave it to me one year ago. This is very original because it is similar to a watch. It is on one wall of my room. It's the best clock of the world.
Bye,
Pablo Mateos
-My photos
ResponderEliminarI really like my photos with my family and my friends. I've got a lot! I keep them in albums or I put them in frames. I also sabe them in the computer and if I want I can print them. I think the photos are the best thing to remember all the moments. I like them because they remind me the good moments that I've lived and the image of those beloved ones who are not here with us.
-My piano
I've been playing piano since I was six. I like my piano because I love playing the piano. I take piano lessons but I don't think about piano as an obligation. I'm relaxed when I play it. I also like my piano because I think is the best instrument in the world. I like his sound and I like compusing songs with it.
-My teddy bear
I've got a lovely big teddy bear. I like it because it was a present of my coussin. My lovely big white teddy bear is in my bedroom. I love giving it hugs. It's the softest one in the world and it's cuddlier than others teddy bears.
Apart of this thins I've got others like my Real Madrid t-shirt, my mobile phone...
By Mónica
Hi Mónica, congratulations! It is a very good writing and I´ve only made a few corrections. GOOD GIRL!!
Eliminar-My photos
I really like my photos with my family and my friends. I've got a lot! I keep them in albums or I put them in frames. I also save them in the computer and if I want I can print them. I think the photos are the best thing to remember all the moments. I like them because they remind of me the good moments that I've lived and the image of those beloved ones who are not here with us.
-My piano
I've been playing piano since I was six. I like my piano because I love playing the it. I take piano lessons but I don't think about it as an obligation. I'm relaxed when I play it. I also like my piano because I think it is the best instrument in the world. I like its sound and I like composing songs with it.
-My teddy bear
I've got a lovely big teddy bear. I like it because it was a present of my cousin. My lovely big white teddy bear is in my bedroom. I love giving it hugs (hugging it). It's the softest one in the world and it's cuddlier than other teddy bears.
Apart of this things I've got others like my Real Madrid t-shirt, my mobile phone...
By Mónica
my mobile phone : I´ve got a wonderful black mobile phone.My brother Cristian gave it to me three months ago and I love it.I hardly ever play games.I always listen to music and send whasApp, almost every day
ResponderEliminarA flat cap: I´ve got a beutiful, pink , black and green flat cap.My sister-in-law gave it to me three months ago. I use it often.
A CD of my idol: I´ve got a preferted CD,because he is the my idol aloy.My brother Cristian gave it to me six months ago.I love a CD
Hi Nerea, here goes your correction. Next time I hope you do it on time !
EliminarMy mobile phone :
I´ve got a wonderful black mobile phone.My brother Cristian gave it to me three months ago and I love it.I hardly ever play games.I always listen to music and send whasApps, almost every day
A flat cap:
I´ve got a beutiful, pink , black and green flat cap.My sister-in-law gave it to me three months ago. I often use it.
A CD of my idol:
I´ve got a preferred (favourite) CD,because it is my idol aloy´s CD.My brother Cristian gave it to me six months ago.I love my CD
By Nerea